With the fast development of science and technology, online courses have been increasingly popular. And as online courses are becoming diversified, some people start to get worried that the day which online course replaces traditional course will come.

隨著科技的快速發(fā)展，網絡課程越來越受歡迎。隨著網絡課程的多樣化發(fā)展，一些人開始擔心有一天它會代替?zhèn)鹘y(tǒng)的課程。

As far as I am concerned, online courses cannot replace traditional ones for that the latter has some advantages cannot replaced by the former.

就我認為，網絡課程是不能代替?zhèn)鹘y(tǒng)的，因為傳統(tǒng)課程有無法被網絡課程代替的優(yōu)勢。

For one thing, the biggest advantage of traditional course is that it provides a chance for every student to communicate with teachers face to face, while online course cannot achieve this effect. Attending to a traditional course is not only a process of receiving knowledge, but also an opportunity for students to exchange their minds with their teachers, communicate with their peers and learn to think on their own.

一方面，傳統(tǒng)課程最大的優(yōu)勢在于它為每個學生提供了一個與教師面對面交流的機會，而網絡課程則無法達到這一效果。參加傳統(tǒng)課程不僅是接受知識的過程，同時也為學生與老師交流思想，與同齡人交流，學會自己思考提供了機會。

For another, traditional courses have more applicability than online ones since the students attending traditional courses have similar understanding or the same amount of knowledge towards a subject, while online courses are difficult to respond the different needs from people with different aims and levels.

另一方面，傳統(tǒng)課程比網絡課程更體貼，因為參加傳統(tǒng)的課程的學生對同一物體有著相似的理解或者有著同樣的知識，而網絡課程則很難應對不同需求，目標和水平的人。

Therefore, traditional courses will not be replaced by online ones. But in addition, I advocate that colleges provide some online courses for students to study by themselves besides traditional ones.

因此，傳統(tǒng)的課程不會被網絡課程而取代。另外，我主張學校應該為學生提供除了傳統(tǒng)課程之外還提供一些網絡課程讓學生自學。

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